Saturday, September 7, 2013

Dialoge

"hey, what's up?"
"nothing."
"are you okay?"
"I was a few seconds ago."
"what's wrong now?"
"I'm not feeling well.."
"Well what happened to make you feel bad?"
"My stomach, head, back, and throat hurt really bad."
"Did you eat something different today?
"No, not that I know of.."
"Have you been to the doctor lately?"
"NO!"
"Why do you say it like that?"
"It's an awful place!"
"No it isn't! They make the things that hurt, not hurt anymore!"
"Well I'm still not going!"
"Why not?"
"Okay, the real reason I don't want to visit the doctor is because they always give me shots and I hate shots!"
"You should get the numbing cream they have! It's great!"
"Wow, I didn't know they had stuff like that! I guess I should go to the doctor then!"
"Yeah, you really should! I promise it won't be as bad as you think!"
"Okay, well I'm making my appointment today! Thanks!"
"Any time! Hope you get well soon."
"Thank you! see you soon!"
"bye"

2 comments:

  1. Hey Alyssa, this conversation is great haha; I totally agree with the character that hates shots. Do they really have numbing cream?

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  2. nice dialog. I like the use of punctuation.

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